It's a great novel, with a very careful, discreet and intelligent MC who becomes very powerful with the help of the system and does not hesitate to kill an enemy if he has the possibility or enslave him, and what i like the most is that the MC does not Simp or becomes Beta for any girls.Overall, a very enjoyable novel for Cultivation fans to read.
the other comments have already said enough. after he got the fairy, it all went downhill FAST. its not worth the "high" rating it has, if you cant even make the mc consistent, then it already speaks volumes on the quality of your story
Hello, a few words from the authorThis is a slow-paced story, please be patient with :) and this is a rework of my second novel Tribe Online.since this is a game novel, I will try to balance 40% time within the game, 40% time about his real life, and the remaining 20% is about competitive scene, e-sport, and others. I will try to balance it like this.Criticisms are welcomed, but sometimes (or maybe most of the time) people think that sh*t-talking is being "harsh" to critic the author while actually, it's not a criticism, you are being rude. I will delete such a review if there's one. thanks and hope you enjoy the story.
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Best story I've ever read on this app. An actual realistic ish main character, who doesn't through the magic of a system turn into michael jordan in his rookie year. The main character, Hector actually fails and learns which is refreshing.
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