Seductive shadows

Writer changing too many things as story developing. He says mc is level 25, then 1 episode later boom mc is level 19. Completely time waste.

Why am I allowed to rate my own story? Of course, I'm gonna be a biased prick and give myself all fives? Screw fair play! I'm in this for the long run! Here's a 1

It is a great Book. A great writing skill. I like so much this novel. I wish there will more novel like this is to interesting novel. Thank you for this novel.

Story is great.Translation after chapter 40 S*CKS.The translation ruined it all. Use Go*ogle Translate or ChatG*T to get a better translation or to edit the chapters

the novel is quite good and enjoyable to read. but I gotta say that the world building is not quite there yet. It is quite confusing how each fraction in this novel operates due to its sudden introduction with little context. Sometimes I even wonder why the author even bothers to introduce them since it serves little purpose to the main protagonist. One little thing that bothers me is the names of the characters in this novel. Some seem to  have their names from the European side and some from the China side which I think is quite inconsistent with the theme of cultivation or culture in the world.but overall if you can look past these flaws. It's still a good read.

Dear author, are you alive or? It's been long since you put this book on hiatus mode.  Or you don't know how to complete it?

<p>She got out of bed and shook her friend until she sat up. Ariana turned on her bed side lamp and looked up at Edlyn. "Sorry I can't sleep." She mumbled and Edlyn signed her worry. "Yes Cayden is part of it but... Edlyn what if I said I needed your help?" Edlyn was caught of guard and sat down on Ariana's bed. She nodded her head. "Anything." She signed. "What if I told you I'm not normal?" Ariana sighed. Edlyn tilted her head. "Of course you're not but I still love you."</p>

<p>Inside the ambulance, Qin Ming quickly turned his gaze toward the "mummy-man" across from him.</p>