Read it until chapter 20 and i can only say that the mc is dumb and weak. He has such a strong power buy he doesnt use it to its full potential. Its like the author likes to make his mc suffer and undermine him. I'd rather have Dupe as the mc or even Jake, thousands of times better than a typical xianxia-like villain character which the mc has.
I just don't want to continue reading this. Two chapters in, I can't read no more. It is just terrible. It was have been interesting if mc wrote a decent novel but there are all trash.
You know the base of the story is great but it feels like he’s trying to put to many pieces from to many different puzzles and then make it fit I like the story but it is insanely complex
Pro: Good grammar, writing quality is very good compared to other novel’s on the site. Con: idot mc. He chooses not to Increase his stats using the system even after being nearly killed multiple times. Granted he does end up using them but he chose to remain weak for a very long time. I do understand having the mc be stupid, Naive, or weak but he has had multiple wake up calls and refuses to answer them. Pro: world design is very good. Especially with the way its shrouded in mystery and everything isnt given to you upfront like many novels on this siteCon: thus far side character development has sucked im beginning to wonder why they are even there. I digress im not fully caught up on chaps but thus far instead of caring about characters I either wish for their deaths, especially Erik, Or i’m just plain indefferent about their wellbeing.Pro: despite his shortcomings MC seems human which i really enjoy and some of his actions actually make sense which I really enjoyThese are my thoughts thus far and I do apologize if the spelling sucks WN turns of autocorrect on my phone.If anyone thinks in wrong about any of these feel free to reply
I think you should mention mc in the real world too, and cut relationship between church because her father is using him and restraining his potential!!
This story actually has the potential of becoming a popular read If the author could just find time to fix the grammatical errors and add more action or something along those lines.All in all, it's a good book. Already added it to my library.Looking forward to more improvement 😇
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