Secrets of the Azure Sea

Please for the love of God, do not translate this. The best thing I can say about this novel is that the grammar is alright and there are no spelling errors.The story is bad, bland characters, even worse world building and not a single original idea.To regurgitate: The MC is a transmigrator with an OP system, but instead of learning about it or thinking about his future he spents his time pleasing a strange women. He is literally rich and has an OP system. A little patience and he could become a productive member of society, which he does not because he is way to lazy. World building is shit because there is literally no way to become more than dirt without a beast summon. Like any society would function without guaranteeing the survival of the next generation, at least for those moderately wealthy. Hire someone for God's sake. Nothing more gets explained, there is no background or logic in this novel. The MC has the arrogance of a transmigrator, the lack of brain of the worst kind of dick steered beta male and the depression of a total washup. The female characters make no sense, have no consistent background or motivation.Do yourself a favor and do not read this.

Fully fleshed out world, complex hero, top notch writing, characters that have their own motivations and don't exist just to further the plot.  The plot itself seems way more GOTh than the-chosen-one.  This book deserves a lot more attention.

It's a nice read especially when you use the audio feature (which many people don't know exists, for some reason) But the author needs an editor, proofreader or just do it themselves. personally, I use Grammarly along with a read aloud app so I can edit while I listen to the story being read to me. YOU NEED THIS!  especially for the first few chapters.  I'm not perfect either but I try to minimise the grammar errors because it's one of the major turnoffs in a story.  I like the story concept as well.* If anyone's interested in giving my novel "The Epic Adventures of Maou and Shelly" a read (I promise it's good. use the audio feature if you have it.)

"I see~ you finally notice it, well, it's a bit more hard to say and it's a bit secretive, but once more thought there is no losses to tell you this secret" the goddess finally agreed and beaming a bright smile 'her smile is always beautiful and melting your heart'

"I CAN'T SEE YOUR BRIDGE, DAMN IT!!!"

"And you don't love me?"

i lost touch of you

[Veins and Heart of Nature]