Well... not sports... not short stories... has GIGOLO on the title...Yep... won my votes... xDI do wish there were more fmcs but if the she is strong and has a nice temper i don't mind her lover being the mc...
this is not a translation, this is a fanfic of the original works where the characters and setting is changed to be more in ideal of the translator.this is very unprofessional.don't call this a translation, just call this a fanfic of the original work.the ratings is not based on the original works.if you are looking for the original, just search 我能看到欲望清单.
Great novel, recommended from first 20 novels, if this doesnt get picked i'll really read mtl for it. PLEASE PEOPLE OUT THERE TRY OUT THIS NOVEL, JUST THE FIRST 20 CHAPTERS AND LET IT BE PICKED PLSSSS!!!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭
I'd like to remind that this is entirely my own opinion and only based upon everything up to chapter 23. (Since there wasn't more out yet.)Writing Quality:It's noticeable that the writer has some experience. There are barely any grammar mistakes, atleast as far as I can tell. Which isn't very much, so take it with a grain of salt.Story Development:Story pacing is also very good. No boring places, only constant thrill. Not to say it's just action, but it's always interesting.Character Design:The characters are all distinct, with their own motivation and development. I like particularly that they are distinguishable alone from the way they talk. Very impressive.The main character is relatable and his choices are understandable. He changes upon his own mistakes and learns from them.Update stability:What's to say? The writer does still write, so good. I guess...World Background:Very interesting world, no unnecessary info dumps. It flows naturally into the story.Summary:Very good. I'm genuinely excited for more. There's no real point above, so I mention it here. The self aware humor is top notch.I wish I could write that good.
the story is good and it is great that the author already warned the reader or let just say he already set the expectations of readers in the level that he know the novel has and it make sense reading it knowing things.
Very very well written. The vocabulary and grammar are spot on. The plot is epic but most of all, the character growth is really well done! Excellent novel!
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