Saved by a Woman (GirlxGirl) {Complete}

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was enjoying it until the time travel part , sad to drop this ....

The story had potential but the author made all the characters brain dead. In the battle against the unicorn riders the so called elite troops, the MC fights against them, and kills most of them by simply blocking their vision and stabbing them and their Elite troops? Even if they couldn't personal defend themselves, your telling me that the don't have the teamwork necessary to block an attack for their comrade?And as an army commander, you believed that an ordinary soldier fought off elven troops that almost killed your entire squad, walked away practically unharmed and you don't suspect anything?And now the elven princess, she told her enemy when her soldiers would attack, (putting aside the fact that our MC readily believed her), and has the power to talk to MC from like another dimension but can't even defend herself when the MC rushes her? It makes no sense that whoever taught her magic didn't even teach she common spells like magic shield and magic missile

Pretty good so far maybe Improve the writing style a bit its still good overall!                                                              

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It's me, Hi, I'm the problem, it me. 🫣 I'm shy, but, here it goes. Authors don't expect high of me, 🫣From my perspective, the story, has a strong emotional and suspenseful foundation. The mystery surrounding Samantha’s disappearance, combined with supernatural undertones, creates an eerie and gripping atmosphere. Kathleen’s determination to uncover the truth adds emotional weight, making the story more than just a horror mystery—it’s also about friendship, loss, and the unknown.  However, the effectiveness of the horror elements depends on how well tension is maintained.If the pacing is too fast, the suspense might not fully build, and if it’s too slow, it could lose momentum. Character depth, especially for Samantha and those connected to her, will be crucial in making the mystery feel impactful.  Overall, it has strong potential as a psychological horror-thriller, especially if the eerie elements and character relationships are developed with care. 🫣okay, amma, hide now.

I created this account just to make a comment here. more author should make this kind of novel !!5/5storyline : are so good,mc : is overpowered while doesn't make you bored,Joke : trust me, it's not typical Chinese freak joke, it's actually using western joke.satisfying : god level

Ots nice. The beast is good but dies the phoenix come in different elemnts? Because i did not hear abou it. I know only ice and fire.But the novel is slow. Do not know will take this or not.

Beautiful and nice characters, I can’t wait for Chris’s happy ending

Author here !  Give starting 2-3 chapters a chance . You will definitely like it .I am updating chapters 5-6 days a week .

Read upto ch 39.The good thing about the novel is that the writer is very passionate about the novel. The way he built or designed each character and the plot had the promise of a great novel.Unfortunately, he has failed to deliver consistency of the characters in my opinion. The novel fails to paint a clear picture of the MC and his friends. Sometimes it seems like everything is under their control, in the next chapters some nobody manages to disrupt their plans. There are many plotholes and undeveloped plots, like the circle which is mentioned in the first chapter. Maybe the author would develop them in the following chapters, but my main problem is with these inconsistencies that breaks the immersion for me.