Simply stated, this an average novel among Webnovel standards. 2-D characters that aren’t fleshed out, so they feel like the generic MC’s and secondary characters all over this website.The plot in this story started fairly simple and easy to grasp, a reincarnated second chance to reach the top and beyond. What started as a VR story became a mixture of Gods and the supernatural, which could’ve been great if it wasn’t for one thing... VR. Just like Shura’s Wrath, an older novel that tried to merge the VR world and real world. Like it’s predecessor, this one failed so far.Not to insult the authors ability but every character you’ve read about in any other VR novel, is literally the same except the change in names and locations. To the MC’s love interest whose beauty is ‘absurdly-breathtaking-she-hides-her-beauty. Even the MC and Gods can’t resist.’ The MC himself is no different, following the ‘cold-hearted and emotional’ trope. This novel could have better potential but the author tries to make things edgy and emo, making the novel a cringe-read. I assume because the author is probably a first-timer and a teenager (which turns out to be false, since they’re a law student.) Instead of using VR, the author should’ve opted to based the story in the real word with fantasy elements or- in the future where VR was so transcendent, it literally was a second life rather than just a ‘game’. This would’ve meshed the story better in my humble opinion. Instead we have immersion breaking elements such as status bars and other rpg-elements that’s redundant throughout chapters. Which will only further destroy the immersion for the reader since the author introduced the concept of different ‘universes’ based on a theme (wuxia, steampunk, western...). The novel is decent for a speed-read or when bored. If the author would further refine and better mix the world of reality and VR, this story could leap. Unfortunately the combo of stale characters and storytelling sells it short.
another xenophobic nationalist garbage.the writer or shill as you may want to call it is quite openly displaying his bigotry is there was ever am Olympic event for hate and fantasy he would get it. lol japan begging to be ther part. Korea begging for votes to join the.. what nonsense.
honestly he story is neither good neither bad, I should say average. The story go like I like to say Chinese style, dragging and putting many useless thing to make more words/chapters. we're at 400chapters and the mc is lvl 15 and the average of the server is around 10/12. a boss is around 20 to 40 chapters with always full people coming like ants. Even the simple act of putting items to auction took 4 to10 chapters cause a full band of "stupid Youngs masters" come to drag more where a chapter would have be enough (well honestly we could do without since it was just non sense and useless). the story could be way better without all this dragging every fight with void. I really hope that you can reduce a lot the CN style to have a good pace of your story
Read to chapter 39This isn't a player turns NPC into a game novel.The MC is transported into a fantasy world where he has a system based on a social browser game and that he only bought the starter pack for.He has to level up his base (Elemental Tower), summon heroes (like Dra), and build up an army of mob soldiers (Elemental Summons).As long as you've played a game that requires you to train armies and summon heroes you can pretty much understand the gist of the novel, I've only read one translation similar to this called My Doomsday City(or Fortress?) and I'm a fan of these type of novels.Overall I like it. 😁👍 [My Doomsday City(Fortress?) doesn't have many chapters translated btw]
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