Ohhh and worst of fucking all.. the douche of a writer loves to start spoiling his own fucking writing.. literally and I’m not talking about little side notes or messages at the end of chapters.. nah he does it in the middle of shit, just to point out this is important fact but it’s not, it it just vaguely says he’s going to be ruler and king blah blah blah stuff, like random characters keep talking about the MCs “destiny” constantly.. so I don’t feel like I’m enjoying it as much.. like the writer really didn’t try at all, everything is just generic copies, I don’t feel imagination, It feels more closely related to our views of mythology and gods and stuff.. not a fantasy manga about a vr video game..
Honestly speaking this could’ve been a masterpiece, being my 2nd fav but clearly this writer doesn’t have the talent TBATE has with the beginning after the end..
Okay I’m do love this story in some ways but holy I’m so sick of this writer, he’s bad at storytelling.. constantly repeating and making EVERY single thing longer.. like he’ll show new skills and full out explain in detail about it, not once but everytime and with every single thing..
the amount of stuff I skip/skim over is getting more and more.. maybe 2 paragraphs of every chapter are needed, he just adds unnecessary words it’s getting so annoying
Im currently at ch480ish but I’m about to drop it.. this guy just doesn’t care about the story anymore and wants to make a porno.. also including more lolis (legit little kids).. technically only 1 girl is over 20yrs old..
Okay so I just started at ch0 but the item rarity is dumb af. . the order is so messed up
Steel
Iron
Bronze
silver
Gold
It should be
Bronze
Iron
Steel
Silver
Gold
This is going to be frustrating, idk why you didn’t just take the exact order amount and change it into letter of rarity, I can’t remember the total it went to but let’s say 7 or 9 different types of rarity
Just make it
X for the highest grade
S or SSS for the next 1-3
Boom already 2-4 different types then just make the last weakest ones from A-D or A-F rarity or something like that
Yeah, people really like to complicate things huh. Just ranking them by alphabetical numbers like you said would be much make things much easier, for both the author and the readers.
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Ohhh and worst of fucking all.. the douche of a writer loves to start spoiling his own fucking writing.. literally and I’m not talking about little side notes or messages at the end of chapters.. nah he does it in the middle of shit, just to point out this is important fact but it’s not, it it just vaguely says he’s going to be ruler and king blah blah blah stuff, like random characters keep talking about the MCs “destiny” constantly.. so I don’t feel like I’m enjoying it as much.. like the writer really didn’t try at all, everything is just generic copies, I don’t feel imagination, It feels more closely related to our views of mythology and gods and stuff.. not a fantasy manga about a vr video game..
Honestly speaking this could’ve been a masterpiece, being my 2nd fav but clearly this writer doesn’t have the talent TBATE has with the beginning after the end..
the amount of stuff I skip/skim over is getting more and more.. maybe 2 paragraphs of every chapter are needed, he just adds unnecessary words it’s getting so annoying
Im currently at ch480ish but I’m about to drop it.. this guy just doesn’t care about the story anymore and wants to make a porno.. also including more lolis (legit little kids).. technically only 1 girl is over 20yrs old..
Steel
Iron
Bronze
silver
Gold
It should be
Bronze
Iron
Steel
Silver
Gold
This is going to be frustrating, idk why you didn’t just take the exact order amount and change it into letter of rarity, I can’t remember the total it went to but let’s say 7 or 9 different types of rarity
Just make it
X for the highest grade
S or SSS for the next 1-3
Boom already 2-4 different types then just make the last weakest ones from A-D or A-F rarity or something like that
heaven
god
saint?
forbidden
as well as
heaven boss
god boss
saint boss
In any novel or even a game, since when has something saint-ranked ever been ranked higher than a god-ranked?
Correction: 8 MONTHS AGO
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