Samael Lake

so far everything is good but the is one small problem maybe i did not notice it but the seem to be very little information about the cultivation path, i figure moral is warrior spiritual is a mage as for divine could it be with occupation plus a divine ability or something like that? maybe i am wrong.  but other that that good book, cant wait for the next update.

hello, Can you review my book----------------------------------------------------------------THE PART OF NO RETURN : FIRST HUMAN EMPIRE------------------------------ Please

Overall !ice plot , love how the story's going and the character development is going great . Would recommend 👌😉

"Kita pulang sekarang." Yoona tidak menghiraukan perkataannya. Ia malah berjalan meninggalkan Sehun disana. Gadis itu langsung masuk kedalam mobil. Sesungguh Yoona tidak sedang marah. Ia hanya mencoba menahan malu.

"I miss you too, Hindler. Kung alam mo lang kung gaano ko pinagsisihan ang ipagtapat--"

"Yeah… if they destroyed us… we'd be dead… why make us fight each other?"

"Euh, no but he was quite pissed that his suit was stained."

A second wave, the dark-haired vamps closed with Lucas, each of them grabbing one of his arms.  The living vamps didn't have the full strength of true vamps; Lucas was able to shake them off, but he lost the stake.  

So much to do, so much to see

so far so good. like the plot. at least humanity has a chance

Its really good, starting hooked me fr and the vivid description are well written, good job 👏