i know this might get deleted soon but i will say this,even if my vote doesnt count,i wont vote or read this as you are delaying astral pet store for iras copy of videogame designer
The way the author has described the events is just amazing! The synopsis, the characters, the way you picture the story for us is just superb! One can learn so much from your work (speaking from an aspiring author's perspective) What I liked the most about your narrating style is that you know what questions could possibly arise in the reader's mind while visualising/reading the story and then you give the explanation to those questions without even asking... that is commendable! Also the fact that you write in a very calm and non-hurried fashion is an indication of your hard-work which you put to organize the things. This story and the narration is superb. I would definitely keep on reading and learning from it. Thanks and Kudos to the Author!
Shameless! yuri? vampires? blood? way to use said blood? oh yes and so much more! come join Kiada on her journey to find her lost girls in another reborn series!this book is part of the reborn collection Harem RebornHyde, Worldwalker Reborn
I tried to read this book till chapter 23.And here i am now to write a review about it. It's not bad. But it's not good either. If you have some free time and don't know what to do of it , that book might be a good choice.Here are the pros: - Logic is applied here and things are explained very well( tanks so much! That's something lacking in so much books on this app.)- The Mc is not hot-headed or arrogant and is good at studies. - The Mc is rather powerful ** If you don't like "the strong acting weak" kind of Mc , this is not for you( don't know if it will change in the future though)Now , for the cons: Overall, this book is boring. It is mostly the case because the MC himself is not entertaining. We don't know much about his past , we don't know if the previous owner of his new body had friends , he doesn't suffer much in fights , doesn't interact much with other characters, doesn't have an ambition of wolrd domination or anything else than " living a peaceful life"... it's like he is really an EXTRA whose adventure we are following. What i mean is, even Fade( book mc's) internal thoughts were more entertaining than his. I even surprised myself enjoying more chapters focusing on other characters' lives than chapters focused on him, which are honestly so bland.I never see him train yet he always wins without breaking a sweat , he says he is really selfish and doesn't care about the plot( which he should care for a little bit at least, as a minor change can cause world ending catastrophes), and he seems to consider Fade as... his only true menace? What really killed it for me was how he fell in love with Lia after only minor interactions.On the other side , characters such as Lia and Fade are rather well-built. And that's why i'm so surprised that the author failed at creating an interesting protagonist.A part from character development, another problem is the writing quality.I do not feel any fear or tension in the story at all( from its beginning to the 23rd chapter).Some events differed from the book but they are either not that impactful( Lia's change in behaviour) or not introduced or resolved in a way that will make us think" Oh! That seems dangerous. Mc gotta be careful!" ( octopus attacks). It's good that a Mc doesn't focus on following the original plot no matter what. However , when he/she realises that a changement is harmful, he/she should be shown as preoccupied by the developpement of the situation a bit more . Here i only see him "steal" Fade's original opportunities, but never do i tell myself that" the situation is serious. The Mc really needs X item now."This is due to the fact that eventhough we don't know about "fragments" and the person(s) who is( are) targeting the Mc , this mystery is treated in a way that makes it appear as trivial. Other than that , the grammar is a mess( too many errors) , the book is fast paced , inconsistent, and the fighting scenes are not that good.Now , onto the story developement. It's like the author doesn't have a clear idea about how the book should progress.( e.g: The poll to know which reward the Mc would get at the wishing lake )Plus , up til chapter 23 , i don't see any stakes( for now i consider Fade as the sole antagonist). I don't really sense the impact of students' death on other students, the feelings that come with killing for the first time( i'm talking about the mc) even if it is a monster, nor the consequences on the school . And nothing is a real challenge for the Mc. Heck, even the original novel's end has never been talked about( the final bosses, how it unfolded ...).Overall, i can describe the story as a boat transporting statues( the characters) to an unknown port , without going trough as much as a rain.What about updating quality and world background now?It's not that glorious either. The updates are slow and the world hasn't been explored much now . But the only things that have been shown are quite appreciable( the fact that the strongest individuals are ss-rank , unlike other novels where ranks continue to increase).
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