English is probably not the authors native language, and I understand that. Some grammar and stuff have to be changed, but it is fine. The character design is hilarious, him being rich and a narcissist but reincarnating as a monkey.
With the amount of inconsistencies that the author didn’t go back and fix to chapter 6 I had to drop this.. has an interesting idea but if a author that post the story doesn’t care about his work then why should I?
It starts off in a way you know it'll be complex but it's a really good book, it's obvious that the Author put in a lot of work in it. Not to put out any spoilers I'll advice you to try a couple chapters and trust me when I say you'll be hooked.
Honestly, I was looking forward to reading this novel and it greatly disappointed me.You're thrown right into the book without any introduction or build up. Theres practice no logic. like how did he end up meeting the Duke? how does he buy weapons and arms from earth? (no description or story of the actual earth)MC is really concieted and quite stupid. if you want something that has actual sense and world devotion read empress gigglo (Mc has the power to transfer between world and uses it to improve that worlds civilisation)
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