loving this story , i'm just eagerly waiting for the mc to start cultivating through *** , the stronger the girl he f u c k s the stronger he will become ! muhahahaha!
story is GREAT, love all the characters and the world itself. For first time readers it is probably a good time reading through it If you can manage to not get annoyed by the constant mid world line switches.however the novel has been out for a long time now so why are they going back through it and rewriting names and certain lines of text? makes it feel really inconsistent and worst part is that it's so poorly edited now, with text that get cut off mid sentence for line switches.rereading this has genuinely been a 3/5 experience at best. truly a bad decision to go back and editing it.
The story is almost exclusively told to the readers. Almost 10 chapters were just a slightly altered rehash of the movie. Everything comes too easily. There is (in my opinion) next to no story. I've no interest in the MC as there's nothing relatable. I react more emotionally to all the bashing of corporate greed ruining good games then I do the blank MC. Perhaps the writing improves but I can't tell as of yet. The concept is interesting and may be the saving grace of the whole thing. As long as you're alright reading a story that's told to you and are more interested in the idea of the story than good writing this can be an okay read. Personally I'd love to read this once it is rewritten though I don't think that'll happen.
I mean, it's a pretty solid story compared to the many trash translations from this Web site _______________________________________________________________________
"Madam we're here.' The driver said as we pulled up to the gate of the castle. We were greeted at the entrance by a group of people. "Welcome back sweetie. How was the flower garden?" An elderly woman asked. I was paralyzed with fear.
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