Risen World

Is he going to be a hero to the end or will we see some hardships to harden him later on?

Please answer me.

This story isn't anything special,if anything is very below average! The MC is to much of a "hero",it's so stupid how much he wants to save people! Like I would understand if the where his family or close friends but no there legit just random people! In the first couple chapters there's this women who screams and when she screamed monsters came so people where naturally mad at her but the MC is like,"Hey! Leave that poor women alone! I'm a stupid simp who thinks this women is really hot and I'm a hero for everyone so do as I say!" Like the MC is just so frustrating about all that hero stuff! This doesn't really go with how the story is but I have to say this,there are like five or six reviews from one guy and there all five star reviews so that's tipping the scale in favor to the author a little to much.

Sorry for the poor grammar,I kinda wrote this in a rush.

As a gift to myself for Christmas I have decided to join the shameless sect and give myself five stars. Seriously though I'm just starting out on this story and I'm enjoying writing it and seeing where things take me. Hopefully this helps me improve my skills and I get better the further along I get in the story. There are several things I have in mind for this novel, but I don't want to spoil anything so I'll keep that talk to myself for now. I hope you guys continue to read and support my book. Comments and critiques are welcomed, but try to be nice to each other in the comment section. Oh and yes even you exp. guys are welcome to come if you want. Thank you for your time.

I like the novel is nice to see an MC different from the rest one that was not a loser before everything went out of ****, volume 1 can feel somewhat overwhelming on some occasions but in general it is a great story, I hope from the heart that does not end abandoned c:

First of all excuse me if there are mistakes english is not my native language. What I can say about this story is that for now it is well written, the characters and the plot is well constructed. The fights are well described without being too surrealist so I like that. For finished I hope that the author continues like that both for the frequency of these updates and for the quality of its plot.

MC is Holy saint! Hero that saves damsel. Too soft. Too naive. This character would be perfect if MC was a 12 years OLD. After all knight in shining armor is the dream of all early ****'s dream. But for a big OLD man like him  it doesn't suit his taste at all. I don't see any ability that stands MC out of the rest. He doesn't have any Idea of Online games. Nor is a nerd. All he is, is a muscle head with good combat power. But wheres the Cheat of MC? Cheats must be introduced in the first chapter in all fiction novels. Author intrudces to god level figures in the first chapter but doesn't tell How mc gonna dominate those figure in the future. This is just pure frustration/ I've already read till climax of this novel. But i dont see any ability that will help him become stronger than those god level figures.

Writing quality-5
Updating stability-5
Story development-3.5
Character design-2
World Background-5

Honestly the plot and world development are really good, but i just dont really like how the mc is a saint. im fine with nice MCs but this is just a little overboard.

Before I say my thought these are genre's that I think the author should add: Action, Adventure, Sword and magic, Guilds, Wars, Pets, Monsters, Game Elements, Evolution, Elves, Dwarves, Sci-fi, hidden gem and Hard-working protaganist. I Feel like more people will see and give this novel a chance with those tags attached to it. 


As I make this review I am currently at chapter 404 and this novel is amazing. This is one of the best novels I've read so far and I've lost count of how many I've read over the years (no I ain't old).
 Great main character, solid background in martial arts and combat in general; doesn't feel like Joshua's OP for no reason. The reasons why he's so strong is given to you straight up in a convincing and VERY realistic manner. All important fights are hard fought and never feel like an easy win from the get go. The way he interacts with other characters actually feels like he's talking to people and not subordinates  or irrelevant extras that are there just to praise him.
Amazing side characters, there has not been a single time where I felt like Joshua's friends, family or even (to my suprise) his first group of guild members have been a waste of space. They all play important roles and they always have a role, always being brought back into relevance. You really don't see that often in novels and I love it in this one.
The world building in this novel is solid, as of right now you won't get any complaints out of me. I also look forward to how Joshua's guild interacts with the World Government guild and the other guilds around the world.

TOP TIER NOVEL SO FAR!! KEEP IT UP!!!