First off, let me say that the translation quality and updates are quite good. There is some odd grammar here and there but within acceptable margins considering the upload speed.I've read up to the latest chapter as of this review (ch. 151) and the MC has barely progressed in cultivating. There's supposed to be 8 or 9 levels and most likely more, but up to ch. 151, he's barely at half kan-level i.e. the first level. According to the statsguy, this novel only has 798 chapters which means more than 1/5 is complete and the MC has done almost nothing.The author spends more time of emphasizing the social life and random events regarding the MC which doesn't contribute to the overall story in my opinion. Even though he should studying for exams or cultivating to progress himself, why is he doing random things like going to his fiance's middle school for parent/teacher meetings or "protecting" her from other students. She didn't need his protection before, why now?Let's move on to character development, trick statement, there isn't much to begin with. His school friends make the same lame jokes about his good luck with women and trying to get the hot girls' numbers from him. His fiance's constant attitude problem hasn't changed much and his just-revealed childhood friend never liked him until he started getting popular which betrays her own character design. She was portrayed in the beginning as goody-two-shoes girl who didn't care about popularity, wealth, or power, but she ends up doing the exact opposite.Lastly, while I understand China's age of consent is 14, it's still kind of creepy to read about a university student is touching a middle school girl's legs who is 15. Why does the author constantly describe how sexy a middle school student is? It's not just the MC's fiance either, there are several occasions where it mentions some of her friends and other random students. It's just weird to me reading it since I'm American and where my state's age of consent is 18.Take my review for a grain of salt but the story just isn't going anywhere at this rate for me to want to continue reading it. Have a nice day.
It’s rare to find a story where as a reader you want to explore the world in depth and all it’s different regions and characters please keep it going. I believe even side stories or content revolving different parts of this world or universe would be very interesting as well thanks for sharing!!
Somewhere in the vast valley, where the grassy meadows looks like land of jade and the mountains stood tall and fearsome like the jaw of a mighty dragon, a swirling vortex of brightly colored had been seen surrounding a young male with black hair that white tips. He looked around fourteen years old with a rather lanky built. Unknown to the young youth, various of changes has happened within his soul.
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