Riding and Slashing: The Dragon and the Lord

Edisi Nawar:

He eyed the moist fries, disgusted by how nasty it was. He picked it up and headed towards the trash bin.

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

"Is that really what you think of yourself to be?" Pietro demanded heatedly, "An usher of creation doesn't rebuild a new world on top of the old destroyed one. All you are is a-"

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"Ok now all of you expect Kakashi and Asuma may go and collect your reward" third instructed.

Simp Mc, Cuck plot, yuri harem every possible thing that makes a story bad is in this novel. Mention clone NTR

So…I’m on the 17th chapter and while the story’s been great so far, it hasn’t warranted the 5* review I’m currently giving. What warrants this 5* review is my pity towards the author for having to deal with so many readers that don’t pay attention. As I said, I am on chapter 17 and I’ve lost count how many times people have attempted to fix the author’s “errors” for things they didn’t pay attention to. There have been explanations to all stat changes, or lack there of yet these readers constantly believe they know what they are talking about which then leads to further confusion as other readers begin to believe what they say.Sorry author, story’s great and I have plans on catching up, hope you the best.

Just your average reader helping a new rising Author🔥🔥🔥P.S:Don't forget to support & motivate him❤️❤️

Woo.. i like where its going, pretty good flow of the story. **BUT** what about " The supporting character's harem is very normal" what about this🤞🤞