Revelations @end of the world

The novel is really good and the story is well driven with this futuristic-science thingy on it. I will be coming back to read more of it.

the writing style is detailed and logical. the world background is interesting and hooks the reader's attention.
just the paragraphs are a bit lengthy and could be simplified to refine an even more immersive version of the content.
overall the story development is good and has a high potential to create a masterpiece.
just give it a try, who might know you would be hooked in the first chapter.

Hi thanks for your review. Especially those who made multiple reviews over time. I dont know if its allowed in the server can anyone please enlighten me. Thanks again for your review.

The book is overall a very good piece of work and is getting a good response in the growth in the views, the overall rating is also good. What a nice novel!

The beginning is pretty good,very well written novel. Has a great pacing,the complexity of the world background all are amazing. Enjoyable reading. This is one of those books you don't want to miss.Keep it up.

nice fusion of science and magic. Now latest revision got galactic battle. looks like a rewrite of star wars and jedi? make it good please. Thanks and Ohayo.

A very interesting book. From the start I thought it was star wars then if became like magic. Maybe like Jedi in star wars. What do you think. Is force the magic?

Hi Mate, first time writing a review. Good reading during my lunch hour. Thanks so much for writing and Gooday. Love you all. Thats my review. Bye.

This is the first time I'm reading a story of this genre and trust me, it is way captivating more than what I imagined. I love your writing style , author. The story outline is really magical and unique. keep it up author.