It took a few minutes before he calmed down and collected himself. His workplace was no safe place for a half-grown slip of a girl, his own body bore testament to that, he decided to just scare her off, it would be for her best after all.
As i spied my other teammate, the one who fought Sasuke arrive, 'Damn! I always forget his name... what was it?? Yuri? Yori? YAUiiII...Ugh!' I silently gave up on remembering what his name was as I ruffled some twigs on myself and rubbed some dirt on my clothes a bit before coming out and moving towards...Yauii??.. Forget it, i nodded at him silently and signed for how many scrolls did he get. After some brief signals we both silently waited for Kaubto who was 10 minutes away from our position and was traveling with team 7 as he made his way towards the tower.
With honesty. I've read only up to chapter 6. And this review will be based on my impression regarding the story's progress, the MC's character, the world background, the relevance of the content to the plot and the translation.Story wise, it's shaky. The author does not have propriety regarding how to develop a story with a good flow. He keeps on jumping here and there that it made me forget the name of the MC after reading a few chapters because he kept dumping information that should only be introduced a bit sooner but not later while neglecting relevant and important information that should be useful in shaping the concept of the novel which is, "What is a Mech in this novel". If we want to talk about an apple, I think we should first describe how it came to be, what composes it, and how does it taste like before talking about apple candy or an apple pie.The MC's character: He appears to be a resilient, smart, and strong individual while being easily annoyed and a bit negligent at the same time. The world background: Well written but gives off the "I've read this before" vibe. Content wise, it's jam-packed but lacks an essential ingredient. "The Mech/Mechs and its specifications, uses, kinds, types, size, etc.". It's irritating to read a mech novel, wherein there is too much info dump, but the mechs are still vaguely introduced.The translation: is pretty good. Being able to deliver especially translating sci-fi type novel is commendable.I will continue reading it, maybe. I'm a fan of this kind of novels but, I choose what I read. So far, it's not up to the level of "I want to continue to reading it" yet. (I'll be updating this review if I ever got the chance to do so)
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