Restarting Civilization

Past 50-60 chapters (~ch 70 to ~130) showed an issue: The author doesn't know how to make story arcs actually develop.Things happen, but nothing seems to have progressed. MC is in the same spot, except some inconsequential events happened (i.e. you could skip them, and the story would still be fine).Oh yeah, this author seems to have taken away the MC's ability to think for himself. Asking the guy in his ring about knowledge he doesn't know is one thing, having the MC ask the guy about decisions he should be making himself is another.

I really wanted to like this book, love the premise but it's all over the place and borderline unreadable. A lot of it is disjointed, doesn't make sense and has issue with grammar.

The story of this novel is quite interesting for me, although the writing still needs to be improved, but it doesn't matter to me. this novel is good

i dont care what novels you read and be inspired as long as you go to your own path than copying others its all good . lookinh forward to this novel. dont mind criticism it hones you to be better writer.

The story line seems to be pretty interesting so far. I am curious to see what's going to happen during the MC's journey. I know only 11 chapters are out so far, so I can't really do a complete review.There was a lot of explaining in the beginning, I'm guessing mainly just to rush the story along and get to the base of the story.Towards the last few chapters there were a bit more dialogues and it included the world a little more, so I like that aspect about it.Other than it starting out a little slow paced I thought this story seemed pretty interesting. Although the author did say it's meant to be a slow-paced novel.Keep it up author!

After reading two chapters, I realized this is a worthwhile novel! I included it in my library to enjoy the evening reading, with a cup of tea and bagel. This is the most! So appreciated by bibliophials! Good book in the evening! Find! 5 stars! I will not write about the merits and possible mistakes.I’ll read more, add a review! In the meantime, I want to express my admiration for the author, for such an amazing book !!! Cool!!!

Alright I'm going to be honest if you go into this without expecting to get hooked, you're  wrong! This is the type of story that grabs you, thanks to it's intriguing world and setting, the cool and lovable cast of characters and as far as I'm concerned it is well writen!Overall, this is the good stuff, so keep'em coming!   

You have a lot of points that need to be addressed.1. Edit your work, smaller paragraphs are easier to read.2. Personal speech, the way you currently handle things related to people speaking is very confusing and not reader friendly. Adding personal speech is really easy by marking what was said with "blablabla". Read popular novels and look how they structure interaction of characters.3. Just in the first 2 chapters alone their are so many things wrong with logical thinking and game related stuff. For example, no one stays in a guild just because the guild leader says so, only idiots do that. Or losing all Equipment and having to start from lvl 1 again, players don't have those powers ingame even gm's can't just take your equipment and reset your lvl.There's so much wrong with just the first 2 chapters. Good luck