Love the story so far. I am looking forward to how it develops and based on how things have been set up so far it should be extremely enjoyable. Do yourself a favor and give this story a shot, I am expecting it to turn into a very popular story!
An excellent book with very few gramatical and spelling mistakes. Rarely can an author tie together such a chaotic stream of events in a way that feels just as rushed for the characters as it does for the readers without losing the sense of meaning and the stability of the world. The only fault in the this novel (series?) is that there isn’t more available to read! Not sure why there were only 2 chapters of a volume 2 released with no further updates or info but I would love to see the next chapters in our titular characters’ lives.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful novel with us can't wait to read more the story is getting better and better please continue I love the characters development.
Everyone thanks for the support!Expect thay I will try my best to make the story even better.Also, if you have any thought about my work, just comment it! I honestly enjoy and feel happy reading other's comment to my novel!And please if you can, I would really appreciate if you leave a honest review about my work.⊂( ̄(エ) ̄)⊃
This is great! A smart mc and I like her. I remember a light novel that has the same plot as this. Hope you update more for readers like me to read. It's already in my collection and now I'll continue reading!(Still in chap 15)
Yeet!!! I noticed some errors in grammars but nah!!! Even Grammarly and a little proofreading will remedy those!!! Story Development and pacing is just right, I think? The pacing got rushed after the 5th Chapter though. Fast-paced is different from rushed. Don't be excited to write your thoughts, that's where almost all writers rushes their works. My past work is just like that too😂😂😂. Just like what Webnovel says when you're about to write, Just keep calm and write. Don't be excited or too fired up. Character designs is good and explorative, also imaginative. I quiet envy your imagination, haha. All in all this has potential, keep up the good work!!!
Of course I will give my own book 5 stars I am biased so it is only natural 😭,comment down after every chapter of you have and ideas for the story thank you 😊
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