Requiem of the Lost Exiled

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After 2 weeks of that dreadful Sunday, Mansi found herself outside the JFK Airport in New York.

"Let the match begin!"

Without concerning herself about the matters of the Blazing Sun Sect for even a moment longer, Fenrir was already racing through the sky on her return trip to the Devouring Moon Sect. She had learned a lot during her rather short battle with the Elders and was beginning to understand some of the perks involved with Cultivation. It was intrinsically weaker than the magic system she had learned from Eva but Fenrir felt as though it was far more flexible since it didn't use complex magic circles. It was almost like using unnamed magic, making it far weaker than more complex spells while having almost limitless versatility...

Croc then launched himself and Cap into a large rock causing it to crack from the impact seeing but Cap continued to launch elbows into his back making The large Croc scream in pain, seeing Croc's grip loosening Cap Quickly took charge as he threw a knee to the jaw before going behind Croc and done a German suplex causing Croc to land his neck.

I recommend reading it. Very good story and it's well written, haven't noticed grammar mistakes. Overall great potential, just hope it dosen't get dropped.

Wow bro you are doing a fine job..... Good luck my fellow Ero novelist.

It's hard to tell with just 2 chapters. But it seems like this isn't a typical story, a unique story in fact. I can't wait to see where it goes!

I really do like the novel just it is a bit lengthy, but there is room for improvement and the author also has great potential thank you author