Renée

It starts out quite well and the type has a lot possibilities.But then you get some bad one dimensional characters quite fast: oh you offended me or I don't belive you, I will just attack you. Also the world development iis very limited and seriously one-sided. Everything must only be for the best of humanity, without any realistic considerations of how people actually act.

This is the best horror book I have read in a long time even though this is my first time. Never did I expect to discover a book quite like this. Very interesting how events are progressing it appears to be refreshing itself like a website over and over again every page. It is a  peculiar and eccentric read no cliches is in this novel like others

Looked interesting for a second until the princess kidnapping appeared... Sigh..........................................................................

The story's basically combining a number of systems to create one system that provides basically everything to the MC without him having to really do anything. It's also got the usual cliche super handsome MC, but made worse by the MC being a complete idiot who blanks out on noticing there's a girl with him, and also who responds to someone attacking him and trying to kill him (and straight up telling him) with confusion and, again, blanking out. He also constantly gets lost in his own head, where the author takes time to dole out exposition in situations where he should really be focusing on what's in front of him. I don't expect a hypercompetent MC, but I'm certainly not interested in reading about a mentally challenged, milquetoast of an MC who behaves like he's never held a girl's hand before.

I dont know if the othercrackhead who gave this 5-4 stars are a friend of the author or something, but this LN isn't worth half that. While it does take a new route it isn't well thought out at all, which ruins it from the very beginning. Half of it isnt understandable.

this could be the next big thing. but u kinda fu*ked up everything. anyway, a fresh concept.***********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************

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The story has very nice kingdom building plots. Just the grammar makes it kind of unreadable. Still, I rate this novel 5 star cause i am used to machine translations and bad grammar cant do anything to me (*Evil Laughter*). Thank you very much author for this wonderful novel.