Relentless Pursuit After Divorce

     Here i'm sat in the chair, being forced to wear the clothes that bound our freedom. In this quiet room I just stared at the monitoring glass front of me.

I immediately drink a water and say goodbye to my father.

"Hi Ifritz."

It's refreshingly new... kinda.We seen the card thing before but this improves on that. The MC is the one of two that knows of the cards. This also has fleshed out the rules the cards go by.The world is also different as it shows that the MC isn't the only strong person/group around.Long story short: You can tell there is effort here. Thought-out effort

Nice premise, looking forward to reading some more!.....................................................................................................................................

writing quality is goodpacing is perfectstory devlopment os goodworld background well I guess too early to comment on that but so far so goodI rate this novel 9.5/10