The story is getting worse as the time goes by. Here are the idiotic things i have read so far.On the spot finger printing and checking without magnifying glass.. now thats got to be one of the most inefficient way to validate a person identity trying to enter and secured area.The Author just spent 13 chapters explaining how his brothel works. Author would sometimes spend 3 - 4 chapters on sexy time but spends 1 chapter on a battles that supposed to have happened in days.
Not worthy of the rank of first on the site. There is nothing special at all going on here. MC finds an old machine and because of boredom gains OPness. I've read bad beginning to novels but this one takes the cake at the character's opening lines being boredom. If there were more chapters I might be able to rate this higher but there is nothing special to see here. Characters are plain and antagonists are your everyday classics. There were even filler chapters in the first 20, come on now, I expect better from a first ranked novel.
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The rest of the class heard this shout and looked in their direction, Xu Chao who was still anxious asked: "Who are you to live with the Greatest Water Mage in the Azure Wind Province?"
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