Not bad, there were some typos, but not too much to detract from the story.The development with the love interest (Liu Li) was smooth as heck, hopefully he stays loyal to her. The MC's personal development was also good, even if the system was helping him alot, he still tries his best to do what he can at the moment.
Jimmy laughed scratching his head, "That's a very difficult question but I'm sorry I can't give you the answer but I'll give you a hint, we do know each other and are very close". He laughed and winked.
"Im sorry I can't shake hands with you as you can see im working and have my gloves on. Im afraid to contaminate any evidence after. Being a 1.st class detective you should know that."
Yijun was kneeling down, the sword an extended attachment of his arm. There was a mischievous glint in his green eyes that taunted Chen. The dark-haired boy advanced forward. He wasn't as fast as Yijun, he quickly found out. The boy had twisted his body out of the way, rising to his feet. Up. The next bout came down in an arc-like motion.
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