Please please please edit your chapters before you submit them. Tbh I was looking forward to reading this as it has a good premise but itβs too hard to read so I just gave up. I donβt see that many other people saying anything abt the grammar or spelling so Iβm guessing this will be deleted but at least try editing the first few chapters before you delete this.
A story about a young man who's shocked after being diagnosed with stage-three cancer. At the first glance, you might recall the many stories involving that wicked disease which causes the protagonist to lose a love interest, or a dear friend. Of maybe they lament as their wonderful lives were ending sooner than expected.But, guess what? This novel in particular has NOTHING of that. It's so entertaining! And the comedy is just something else!! The jokes by each chapter are genuine, unexpected, and are not repititive.I myself couldn't contain the smile on my face. Normally, I'd read a chapter or two of a novel each day. But, this was so amazing that I finished all the 14 published chapters at once!!The writing is simple and excellently descriptive of the setting and actions. The choice of words also deliver the jokes just right! My only comment is that I personally think there's too much swearing but I'm sure no one actually minds it. But for me, when swears are used at limit, the humor sounds more likable.Alongside the humor, the plot is also very advanced pretty well! I can proudly say that this is an interesting story not just a book of jokes you'd find at any library.I seriously recommend this to anyone who reads for fun. It's very likely to lighten up your mood. Special thanks to the author's efforts!! Good luck and keep up until the end!!
Good Story Bruh I just want to say to keep going to do more chapters Bruh...B R U H . . . π 𦴠π€ πSome Cookies BRUH..?πͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺ
A good story to read .. it just that its a bit similar to RoTWRTW and Reincarnation of the strongest sword .. but all in all its good π€ and has a diff touch to it .. i really like it ππ
I always end up gravitating towards apocalyptic stories and I certainly enjoy how this one is going! Ashton and Matty are quite the characters and I did laugh at times with how they interact with each other! The first chapter is a great example of setting scene, character dynamic, and using cliffhangers to make you want to read more!
Kurenai pushes her upper body up and quickly covers herself with a towel only to see the small red haired boy holding his ankle and crying "A-are you ok?" I decide to go with the 'Play strong' route "Y-yes I am ok" I try to step forward only to fall down again landing before her letting my perverted little self peek up into her thighs. Though I really was in pain though when i took the step but with my anbu training it didn't effect me enough to warrant a stumble.
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