As its blue blood mixed with the faint traces of Coribou's; the creature spotted a slightly smaller ship a few hundred metres above its position and with unbridled rage it began swimming towards it.
good writing, plot is kinda cliche but is fine I guess, sadly there ain't much chaptersaside from that, keep up the good work and hopefully you could update the story
i feel like nothing happened but i understand the need for chapters like these to advance the story it is kind of weird and abrupt the way you change the pov a headline above each one might help i don't know
my name is also julius wtfffff________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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