Rating(3.9 / 5.0, 18 votes)
5 stars
4(22%)
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First : please don’t abandon the novel , if you write it good you can obtain a first class novel or even a top novel in this page.
Second: if he Is the world I was thinking about he can be something similar to the Heavenly Dao of the novels, that ones who have conscience, like the one of “Journey of the fate destroying emperor” , this is just an idea
Third: YOU CAN DO IT , PLEASE CONTINUE THIS , this remember me to some novels that have a lot of potential and it would be a waste to abandon it
( yes I’m traumatized with that because that is VERY common in web novel, please don’t do that i need to go with the therapist another time)
Besides that... I'm seeing all the "Don't drop the book" comments, can you guys also see the pressure that writing a story like this has? ;3
I'd just like to say that I don't plan on doing so at all. I quite like how things are going and I'd like to make this one of the best light novels out there.
But thanks for the support guys, I really appreciate it and the fact that I'm getting so much love despite this being my first book is really welcoming. So I thank you.
Lots of potential, but the writer clearly needs a ton more practice before being able to pull of what he wants; as it is, the style is inconsistent, sentences are often repetitive, and the descriptions, details, world-building and so forth are done in an odd, jarring manner. The only reason the WQ gets 2 stars is because I've seen far worse on this site.
Great idea, though.
The grammatical errors are minimal and its been a while for me to see a novel with god protagonist or something
plus
The concept is impressive the Mc really push his limits of imagination not some other MCs that think inside the box
Its a new novel, hope author doesn't drop this