Story till the end of the 1st volume was quite great. The MC's ability (Smoke) reminds me a character for HunterxHunter and I have not seen this unique implementation of it (even in the case of Mist).
Outstanding. The main character is not some weak dumb pushover or some naive young boy. i always enjoy when a MC gets going quickly and doesn't take forever to start building their strength. And great spicy chapters too. Worth everyone interested in Taboo relationships and Systems/LitRPG giving it a shot.
this story fun to read and at start maybe he look weak as story developed he become something else . mc is Not a dumb char he is pretty good at what he is doing . world background is unknown little explained. maybe because he is in taboo relationship
Great story so far. I binge read it to the current chapter and so far it's very promising. There are the occasional grammar errors but nothing substantial that will mess up your read. Ultimately it's a smooth read and everything flows quite well. The story so far looks good but I think some people might take issue with the MC who has memories from his prior life and his new life who can at times appear like a dunse. However I can easily see how that's beginning to change. The best part of this novel so far for me has to be the design of the characters and how they interact. The author did a brilliant job on that part. The novel is still at the beginning so not much has been on world background aside from a few things. Overall great novel so far. Highly recommend. I hope you continue with it author and best of luck.
Writing is good and not many mistakes that make it hard to follow, only long paragraphs and small misspellings. Only thing I’d say is a major negative is how dragged the story is- almost 100 chapters just to get to the meeting talked about at the start which was like less than a week away at that point. Makes the story feel stationary.
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Love the so far ❤️. And hope you return back soon