This novel is absolutely godlike I find myself extremely exited every time I see that this novel has been updated. It is one of the best novels I have read in my career thus far. Thank you author for writing this amazing novel.
I absolutely love novels with the main characters like this. So heartless and smart. The world building here is amazing, novels and manga like this is severely underrated.
I'm not changing this review until they fix this gay ass cover art. The rest of this review is just filler for the 140 character limit. Like this review if you agree!
The book have a very interesting premise and the writing quality is superb. However, there are many things that I noticed about the novel that drags it down. The story developes in a very weird and confusing was that make it hard to follow or understand. Importent things and features are added in randomly without any explanation really on what they do and their importance to the overall story. The MCs thought process can be said to be cunning but also a bit one tracked minded. One example of this is when MC kills someone and obtains a new cultivation system, and decides to join that organization in the future to obtain the resources needed in the future when there is a million other things that needed to be done beforehand. The people's thought process in the novel just seem a bit out of place, with them doing things in certain ways to make the story work. This can be greatly attributed to the lack of info provided to us by the author. With random cultivation systems added and new things(treasures,seeds,currency ) introduced it just becomes confusing. The author tries to provide mystery and it is intriguing, but with the severe lack of knowledge regarding the current situation the mysterious aspects just becomes hazy and bring apon more confusion. The power system is also very complex, which is understandable in the world setting currently. The math in the novel is a but wonky but not too bad if u don't look into it too much. the power levels of individuals are all over the place with individuals killing people of way higher cultivation levels and being in places they shouldn't be. (one example is a heavenly god killing a dao emperor in the mortal realm, but is still a weakling in the ground scheme of things when dao emperors are the highest level Acheivalble). I have quite a dislike of the system which seems to be very out of place and provide random helpful things with little to none explanation. Maybe it's just me who find the book confusing with the lack of information, and others can decipher it fine. Overall the book is a decent read, and has a very interesting concept.
Absolute trash advice, as expected by Chinese trash authors. Unbelievable that people give this more than 1 start. If you follow any "advice" from this your novel will end up as a terrible mess. Look for some real advice from good authors.
Okay, first things first, I'm no author nor am I an expert but as a reader, the grammatical errors and poor sentence structure leads to me being unable to picture the scene.Even just a quick run through from a fluent English speaker would significantly help, but I feel that without those errors this story will be an interesting read.Also, I am not sure what the terminology used for this us, but stating who is the current speaker, current POV and seperating different characters' speech.For example, instead of a paragraph looking like:"And that's the plan right" "yeah, perfect"it'd probably be much easier to understand like:John anxiously questioned Bill for the nth time, "And that's the plan right?""Yeah yeah," Bill reassured, "it's perfect."And also at the beginning of each perspective change label who is talking:-----John POV-----
37 seven chapters in and I can't stand reading this anymore.1. Translation quality can be so much better. It's not horrible or anything but the constant misuse of the word "apprehension
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