I'm really enjoying the story so far. the world building feels organic and is enjoyable to learn. I totally recommend reading it. Overall a nice easy read.
Read until chapter 12 and so far I'm liking this a lot, chapters feel a bit small though.
I loved how the second chapter was so dark, instantly pulled me into the story.
The abilities of the MC are also interesting, reminds me of a certain scientific accelerator.
I was kinda expecting some eye related skill.
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I loved how the second chapter was so dark, instantly pulled me into the story.
The abilities of the MC are also interesting, reminds me of a certain scientific accelerator.
I was kinda expecting some eye related skill.