Red-Outlaw

Not bad im not even finished and like it so far

the plot of this story is changing faster then my parent's love for me.sndndkkdmdmfmfmdkdkdkdmfjdndndndmdmdmdmdmmdmdmdkdkdkkdkdkdkdkdldldldld

A MC that actually feels competent to me. Sadly it won’t get picked because people like and pay for bad novels. Filler jekfidodkdkddffffdfrdffgggfff

One of the annoying things about this novel is the constant flashbacks to explain something. It just breaks the flow of the story doing it this way. The next annoying thing is that the MC is basically getting nerfed in the first few chapters because of his d0uche of a brother for no discernible reason. The little sister is no better since she’s basically a leech who only makes trouble for the MC and not even respecting him even though he’s looking after her. It’s amazing that the MC despite having tens of thousands of mana didn’t even have a ****** attack based mana. I know that his Masters reason was for him to get the basics but wouldn’t teaching him how to defend himself while out in the wilderness be common sense?I don’t mind the MC suffering a bit and get stronger because of it but mishap after mishap just makes me think it’d be better for him to just die to put him out of his misery. The stability of the updates is good but there are some unusual word choices and minor spelling mistakes that I can ignore.

reviewing for the free fp. Keep up your good work.

"I'd like that. I really don't want my first my first piece of meat in this world to be some kind of cancerous anomaly."

Her usual happy face slowly turned into one of concern. "You've been acting so weird today. Won't you tell me what's going on?"

But, this might not be bad. And yeah, once in a while, she told me stuff about this world. It's actually useful, but most of it are about monsters. Seems like she really is passionate about studying monsters.