This could be absolute gold, but no unfortunately. the pacing of this story is horrendous, like 100 chapters for not even three full days. better yet, most of it isn't dialog between characters. most of it is info dump and explaining things three times over. so much filler for so little substance.
While vampire stories are not my favorite or even prefered genre, the story is quite good and very intriguing. There are some small granmar issues and the dialogue sometimes feels forced and unnatural. But its nothing granmarly cant fix. The flow of the story is really good and I can already imagine the epic adventure about to happen!
Woah!!! a unique genre enters webnovel and I am so excited to encounter more of what will happen next! I think it just needs some modification when it comes to pacing and sentence structure? XDKudos to the author! 💜
Tomoko had grown tired of this dark and desolate world, it's been months since her last shower. Her nose had grown used to the smell of rotting flesh and she no longer cringes at the sound of death. Even the sight of a zombie up in her face won't faze her now, Tomoko felt numb.
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