first time reviewer, this book has a well thought out story and concept filled with references from things in real life. its a very good book that I recommend you should try if you want a decent reincarnation or MMORG novel with a slight twist and actually well thought outthe quality is very good occasionally every couple of chapters you'll find a error misplacing he/she or something else but overall high qualityupdates are very stable usually 1 chapter a day, unless real life problems occur but they are rare, however the author often will do 2 if certain goals are met regarding golden tickets or other things. The story is developing well and is well thought out, most things make sense and yes sometimes there's a lucky coincidence however its pretty tame, there are a tiny few differences in things from the beginning to how they play out further in however its nothing major.character design is probably the weakest, its ok but not amazingly descriptive as the author doesn't really go out their way too describe everything about the character, usually its just enough to get the general gist of what they look like while leaving it a bit up to the imagination.World background is pretty good the author describes it in a way where you get the general gist of the world while leaving open certain parts as a twist for further down the story.
The grammar is trash for a contracted novel and the dialogue is completely idiotic. The mc is in the body of a 5 year old but everyone treat him like a teenager. The worse is how his adopted mother start training him even thought mc is a malnourished 5 year old, she don't even try to leave him in the hospital to check his healt, with this you can see how much thought the author really put in the novel. Another completely thing is how every 6 year old is playing better than adults, author clearly don't made his research before this, you should know that at this age kid are developing their coordination and muscle so for the to do what is described is ridiculuos. The fic have a great premise but the execution is trash on all levels
the story might seem a little complicated at first and the mc seemed to do stuff out of nowhere, but things become very clear later on I really liked the plot twists,at the end good story and would recommend it.
Definitely a great read, had some unique aspects, Right now it updates a lil slowly so it may just sit in your library but also worth a good binge when you need a quick one
It's good but I'm gon drop it, cuz it's too slow paced, and I don't have the patience to read it. Even if the pace will pick up, I don't want to wait...so yeah.But give it a try if you want.
I absolutely love this stories slow world building! Please please please keep going!!!! I also really loved how real and smart the characters are. Tackling problems very logically.
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