I really don't know why author make mc gave everything to the protagonist. I don't know if you want mc to throw all heroines to protagonist and want to give all opportunity to make him grow then your are the dumbess person in the world.
I really don't know why author make mc gave everything to the protagonist. I don't know if you want mc to throw all heroines to protagonist and want to give all opportunity to make him grow then your are the dumbess person in the world.
So far loving everything. Especially our MC not being stupid and immediately going for the new personality, thing.
Writing Quality: So far so good, I haven't seen any particular big grammatical errors
Stability of Updates: A regular update of once every second day. Which is an easy perfect score.
Story Development: Haven't really read enough to say much about it but I like the build up for upcoming events and such.
Character Design: Best part of the story.
World Background: I have already gotten a great input of multiple different things but not a lot politically, wich is a big thing for me.
So yeah, loving this so far and recommending it to anyone who loves intelligent and scheming protagonists.
honestly the story is good and the writer is quiet talented too , but there were a some plot holes such as when the mc left to adventure he was undercover and only the guild master recognised him , and then left to slay the dragon , meanwhile Lancelot found his aura at the crime scene ( idk man black tech , helps you know the owner of the aura , how it works ? not explained ) and somehow and with no further lead he kind of went where the mc is ,how he knew his location ? not explained , saw him fighting the dragon , used a spell (he's a swordman who can use mana and divinity ,which is unbalanced) that teleports the enemy against his will from miles away , how it works ? not explained then he made a barrier that made him invincible , how it works ? not explained
if you read the above you'll get my first point : only a little is explained.
my second point is how inconsistent the story is , for example lancelot crossed the distance between 2 nations in a day and a half max , while in the 'castle attack' arc the duchess didn't call the Duke to come because it'll take a week ? ,i mean the distance was 20 kilometers and he was far more powerful than Lancelot so shouldn't he cross it in an 2 hours max ?
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My dear friends, mc is a cuck, beta and loser.
Read on your own risk.
Writing Quality: So far so good, I haven't seen any particular big grammatical errors
Stability of Updates: A regular update of once every second day. Which is an easy perfect score.
Story Development: Haven't really read enough to say much about it but I like the build up for upcoming events and such.
Character Design: Best part of the story.
World Background: I have already gotten a great input of multiple different things but not a lot politically, wich is a big thing for me.
So yeah, loving this so far and recommending it to anyone who loves intelligent and scheming protagonists.
if you read the above you'll get my first point : only a little is explained.
my second point is how inconsistent the story is , for example lancelot crossed the distance between 2 nations in a day and a half max , while in the 'castle attack' arc the duchess didn't call the Duke to come because it'll take a week ? ,i mean the distance was 20 kilometers and he was far more powerful than Lancelot so shouldn't he cross it in an 2 hours max ?
My dear friends, mc is a cuck, beta and loser.
Read on your own risk.