Writing quality: deteriorates. It started out okay but got worse as time went on, almost like the author stopped caring or fired his editor or something. Updating stability: good. I dropped this, so I don’t know if it stayed good, but at least it started out that way. Story development: scattershot and ruined. The premise of the story was very interesting at first, but it stopped being interesting when the author decided to have a time skip instead of developing the story he had already started working on. Now, keep in mind that it’s the *worst* kind of time skip - the kind where important things happen during the skip, but the author doesn’t bother informing you of them. The MC even gained and, I assume, lost love interests during the skip. It was jarring and ruined any bit of enjoyment I still got out of this because of its abruptness. Character design: horrible. In the beginning, the side characters only exist to worship at the altar of the MC. After the time skip, it seems like the characters only exist to annoy him. There’s no real in between. World background: bland and wrong. The author has no clue how westerners act, yet set his novel in the west. Further compounding that is that he sets it in the world of the uber rich, but doesn’t seem to know how to write rich lifestyles beyond “whatever’s the most expensive is the best.” All that’s missing are the common tropes: KTVs, car racing, and restaurants with private rooms. The author already refers to people as “Mr. Firstname” so I fully expect by now that more of the other tropes have shown up. Overall: this started out promising but got real bad real quick in every aspect. Don’t waste your time on it.
Very good concept, but I can see that author is not really exploiting all the potential yet, it is good to have fights scenes but it is not so good when the fight scene is dragged out and logically it could have ended sooner and carried on but it did not. In my opinion, there is a lot of information that does not matter or affect the story in any way so author should reconsider to make the flow better without boring chapters.
A great novel, very happy to see it back in translation.The MC is very good, clever and not rash.The universe is interesting, and not as absurd as the one in some other xianxia, so it's a very good read.
Hey I really like the story and how the main character goes back in time to redo his chances. I look forward to seeing how you develop your story and I wish you the best on your book! 👍
I am already a sucker for sci-fi novels and this book just made me love sci-fi genre books ,more! It is really well-written and I was captured by the synopsis!! Great work author!!
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