I have read ahead through raws. My views:1. A good novel. You will know what to expect if you have read Er Gen's previous novels: comedy and world building. No standard arrogant young masters. 2. The title of novel is different in Chinese. I'm guessing translator took heavy liberties as the title is very hard to translate. Also, the chinese synopsis is a poem like structure. It explains about the title of novel. So disappointed that translator skipped it. 3. The MC is a fatty who wishes to become the top dog so that he won't be bullied. After all, the top dog gets the right to bully others.4. There is really no technology much less sci-fi tech. Pretty much standard xianxia setting except we are on Earth.5. The humor is really good. The starting jokes are on MC trying to lose weight.
Writing Quality 5/5 There are a few grammar mistakes but not enough to break the 'immersion', it is overall entertaining and immersive.Story Development 4/5 There has been one red flag but it is so far good Character Design 4/5Updating Stability 3/5 One chapter a few is simply not enough for the readers and for the book to grow World Background 4/5Story Development 4/5
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I have been following this story since its start and I fail to understand why it has 4.2 stars overall. The plot is wonderful and cultivation method is truly unique and mysterious. Given that's it's the most popular light novel in china it deserves 5 stars
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