Rebirth in the Apocalypse: Shadow of the Dark Night

awesome read. plot is so good. great book!

You can't please them all but the story is right up my alley. Why is my rating low though? Well that's because the ending is severely disappointing. In a word, RUSHED. It felt like the author didn't want to continue anymore and just abruptly wrote something that he thought was a good enough wrap up. Well in case it isn't obvious enough with my tone, it's not. There is a huge hole in the story. We don't even know what happened to that Venerable Lie Kong from another county or what his purpose was for implicating the Su family effectively rendering chapters 144-147 absolutely useless. It wasn't even touched upon once in the succeeding chapters all the way to the end. It would've been fine if the MC decided to kill the 3 old guys or the author made something up on a somewhat believable reason why he would spare them. It's a freaking major reason for his wife's family's suffering for crying out loud. Now it just feels like he didn't care enough to get to the bottom of it.

f off i have never seen such a blatant rip off                                                                                                                                                         

Not a terrible concept, but your grammar leaves much to be desired. Consider taking a few days off to edit your entire story. Also consider creating a table of contents and/or an addendum of power levels.

this is so wrong..y isnt good novel get good attention..??!!!y..??y..?y..i badly need new novel with new genre..recently webnovel keep pushing that so called stupid FL and richess ML and i am damn so tired of it..i do like FL lead novels..but not same plot all over again..n.. A VERY BIG THANKS TO U FOR THIS NOVEL..!!!n what important is..it keep making u want to read more..p/s: bout the shameless..dont be..shy peoples wont go anywhere..be bold..

First, this is the most underrated story on webnovel. Second, its not premium. Third, its just amazing. Ill give a TLDR because this will get long.TLDR: Read it. While the pace can be slow in some areas, and there really doesnt seem to be a real threat to the mc at the current time, every chapter is still interesting and fun to read. It keeps you reading, has great quality, and isnt nearly as cliche as most novels.Now for the real review (contains spoilers):Writing Quality - if I could give 4.5 I would, but i couldnt figure out how. it deserves a five over a four though. Great grammar, good structure, varied sentence length, no gender mistakes, nothing. I would give a 4.5 because every now and then a word is spelled wrong or is replaced with a wors that is spelled similarly but has a different meaning. This happens to perhaps one word every 2-3 chapters. The grammar is phenomonal. Update stability - It updates at around the same time day in and day out. I dont mind daily releases because the quality stays consistent and the chapters arent too short.Story Development - Four stars, would have gave 3.5 if I could have. As much as im addicted to the story, its plot is just not something i find...unique? Fresh? Interesting? While the book is not very cliche, the plot is not what I would call revolutionary. Its the typical worlds are merging save the earth story of many video game web novels. Of course, it is done far better than 99 percent of any other story on this site. Also, i never feel a sense of urgency for the mc. Yes, the worlds will merge, yes, humanity is in danger, but the mc will be fine. He grows so quickly that it feels like all problems will just be frozen in ice by his power. I feel nothing for the side characters impending doom because none of the side characters are prevalent enough to make me care. overall the plot just kinda seems like “man goes to VR, Man is OP, man travels around getting more OP, but wait, the big bad is in the background doing....something? Who cares! Fancy armour awaits! All that said, its a general and slightly boring overall plot that is fed to us in a very engaging and interesting way. the plot is not anything great, but its delivery is phenomonal.Character Design - Also a bit flat. The mc is great! He has morals, he has character, he has desires. Everyone else.....Ive read every chapter as it has come out and i can remeber three actual names beyond the generic “mom.” We have Neith, awesome pet spider whose personality i still dont really know. Thalia, stuck out because she was a princess and was a unique character. And King Slayer, only because he is the basically the ***ond in command. Everyone else is just kinda off to the side in “remember if I see them, but dont care about them at all.” While this is due to the mc being alone with Neith most of the time, it not only detracts from the world but also from the plot, as stated earlier. Of course, I love alone time with Adam, its why I read the book, but if im being objective, the lack of character interaction and personality beyond Adam is hurting the story overall.World Development - This is well done. We have gods and stuff in the background we know a bit about, the world has history, it has factions, power struggles, and every nation is unique in its own way. they have thwir own cultures, and the world is well explored through Adams travels. overall, i would say world development is a strong point of the novel.Closing remarks - probably the best book on webnovel. Room for improvement in characters and a bit in plot development (they are linked in this case), but overall, a great story if your looking for something hou wont have to decipher, gives you great fights, and really draws you into the world.

Good story to read. I red all available chapters on one sitting. There are some spelling and grammar error at first but at later chapters it became almost nonexistent. Keep up the good work. Hope you write more chapters. :)

honestly its a very good novel tho i put 5 star update time in hopes that the author updates more he has or she has a very interesting concept and story thats well written id love to read it more often