I made it to chapter 17. Translation quality seems totally fine. Unfortunately the story itself is so bad that I cannot continue. Basically the behaviour of the MC doesn't really match what a thousand year old monster would do, even though the author keeps bringing that up.
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Overall, the entire novel is pretty good except for one definite flaw. The MC. He is obnoxiously Naive to the point that I felt like I was having an Aneurysm reading the things he thinks/says. I find myself speaking/talking out loud about how stupid/naive his actions are atleast 1-2 times per chapter.
The concept is good. This story could be great but it's somewhat unreadable. The author keep changing perspective that breaks the immersion. and keep using 1st person and 3rd person. Please choose one and stick with it.
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