Very interesting plot and interesting concept.
The character seems cool and system 0 is really snarky.
I really like the timeline-jumping concept.
The only thing that I felt could have been done better is to fix the grammatical errors but that can be fixed using something like Grammarly so no real harm done,
Shameless five stars
I rewrote my review because I wanted clearer one for my novel...
I first thought of this novel's idea 7 months ago and I was planning to release it after I finish writing my first novel, but here I am! I decided to join Fantasy Contest with this one!
When I planned to finally create it, I wanted something different, something we don't see a lot in novels, something VERY unique! And this is how I came up with "Realms within Us"! This novel is unique in its own way, with the weird and mysterious events, actions and other stuff that are left in the shadows until the right time comes!
And we mustn't forget the characters with a lot within them and the things that happen to them and will happen too!!
I love this novel because I filled it with everything I wanted in a game and action novel, life lessons and things we should remember (I'm talking about history classes guys haha)
I did change some stuff but trust me those changes have meanings and will be known in future chapters!
Sorry for the long review!!! But I was so excited to explain few things!
I'm thankful to all those who added my novel to their library and I'll be more when you vote for me!
Also, your opinions and thoughts matter so much for me, it helps me to know how you guys feel about some stuff in every chapter or about the novel in general so please do let me know how you feel about it. And I'm someone who LOVES to interact with my readers, so please do not hesitate! Thank you so much again for choosing my novel and I hope you'll keep supporting it 'till this pretty long journey ends!!
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The character seems cool and system 0 is really snarky.
I really like the timeline-jumping concept.
The only thing that I felt could have been done better is to fix the grammatical errors but that can be fixed using something like Grammarly so no real harm done,
I rewrote my review because I wanted clearer one for my novel...
I first thought of this novel's idea 7 months ago and I was planning to release it after I finish writing my first novel, but here I am! I decided to join Fantasy Contest with this one!
When I planned to finally create it, I wanted something different, something we don't see a lot in novels, something VERY unique! And this is how I came up with "Realms within Us"! This novel is unique in its own way, with the weird and mysterious events, actions and other stuff that are left in the shadows until the right time comes!
And we mustn't forget the characters with a lot within them and the things that happen to them and will happen too!!
I love this novel because I filled it with everything I wanted in a game and action novel, life lessons and things we should remember (I'm talking about history classes guys haha)
I did change some stuff but trust me those changes have meanings and will be known in future chapters!
Sorry for the long review!!! But I was so excited to explain few things!
I'm thankful to all those who added my novel to their library and I'll be more when you vote for me!
Also, your opinions and thoughts matter so much for me, it helps me to know how you guys feel about some stuff in every chapter or about the novel in general so please do let me know how you feel about it. And I'm someone who LOVES to interact with my readers, so please do not hesitate! Thank you so much again for choosing my novel and I hope you'll keep supporting it 'till this pretty long journey ends!!