Re: Legendary Inventor

Only shooting stars break the mold

damn bro you are writing a novel now? gotta check It out, be prepared to recieve a ton of constructive criticism lol🤣

I like friendship stories, but this work is at the next level! I like how the author draws the background world so neatly and i like the Japanese culture in the very beginning chapters. The action and the thrill make it even more challenging to read! just some input from me.. i think the author may watch the punctuation and the space between one to another person dialogue so it would be neater. But for the rest of that is good! Nice story to read!

Writing- It is very good, cause the way you expressed it in a documentary style.as for the updates pls Im begging nex chapter pls... nah its good just keep your own pace pls make a discord. story is somewhat good. though you already used history and add something here and there, atleast you should put a bit of of diversity from our own timeline like the part where atleast bonifacio is not dead but atleast imprisoned, or the japanese or germans aiding us discreetly because they are business rivals with the americans

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