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I think the discrimination of the story should also add “crazy fanatic with following his delusions of be good and serving for god “ the way the mc justify his doings”killings” is just halfassed ,and the flow of the story is not grate we dont have a clear presence of the mc thinking process in the start his family background ,world state and world around him which is not constituent.over all i it 3.8/5 points but the story has so much potential maybe the story could be re edited by professional  the  it could be one of the top stories with great fame and could be one of those where i would want to wait for its update everyday eagerly.

Looking forward to this novel. I am absolutely loving it till now. The Mc shows his fear, his heart unable to stop loving ml. I really like it.

A fun read, grammar is also good. The story ia the typical villain stealing luck cliche. Still, a good Story to pass time.

We need to find out an exit from where we are as this looks something like a dungeon and from my perception, I can't seem to find any human beings only demon and demon beasts.

"Do I know you?" "or not! I got it wrong!" they both said at the same time.