Quick Transmigration: The Innocent and Alluring Beauty Becomes the Big Boss’s Beloved Darling

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Concept is cool but everything else is pretty bad.The MC doesn't even try to hide it, it's pretty bland, MC is prideful and 2D, it's brain-dead is the best description.If you want something generic, boring and overly sensitive but also prideful MC turn off your brain and read this.

so after like chapter 7 there are alot of time skips and sporadic gaps in the story. simply making the story way to fast pace to keep track of the story's concept has alot of potential, but to many gaps.

This story is annoying. Very annoying. The theme of magi is great. After all, Warlock of the Magus World gave hope to despairing Chinese novel scene. Giving us a new template of protagonists. But this story? It's irritating on so many levels. I'll just list them for simplicity's sake:1. The body's old will still remains in the body. Which is the rationale for MC making down-right idiotic choices. 2. Everytime someone needs help the MC will be reminded of someone he cares about. Chubby man? Reminds him of his father. Little girl? Reminds him of his little sister. Mean-spirited girl? Reminds him of his older sister. He uses these excuses to act like a shining beacon of righteousness. 3. Superificial MC. First heroine introduced wears a mask. After he sees her appearance for the first time...he moans to himself that he should've been nicer to her. Not only that, his impression of her went up by 1000x. 4. The cheat should've just been a memory palace. But in effect it acts like a deity tier artefact. MC hit by psychological attack? Blocked. MC hit by dream spell? Blocked. The cheat conveniently saves the MC from every little thing. 5. The MC has no idea how to use his cheat at all. Instead of gaining a foundation by reading books, he choses to spend his time trying to chat up beauties. Sigh.6. From time to time the MC will randomly preach socialist ideaologies. About how he believes there's non hierarchy in society et cetera. All in all...this protagonist doesn't deserve to be a magus.

this is the first story i read in this app, but i like this story so much, i already watched the anime version of this, and i really hope, there's season 2

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I Don't know why but just synopsis makes me to stay away from this novel....😅😅😅😅

Well I have to say the story development if fine, if not good, but your lacking in some parts (mostly grammar). Some of things you need to fix is grammar, world building, and character design in that order. I like the goblin stuff, but I’ve read stories like it (re:monster). The best part about this novel is the stability of updates, but after you finish the story that wouldn’t matter anymore, so I would have to rate it lower. But, overall it’s an alright read not bad but not good either just in between.P.S: Author if you are reading this please find an editor or a fan willing to correct the mistakes in the story