I really like this story, it’s interesting and intriguing. Am looking forward for this to get chosen, it’s a story not long by chinese Webnovel standards but that’s alright. So far it has action, comedy and some sadness mixed in it. It’s all of this that I recommend to trial readers, I hope those with coin can help get this chosen because I sure can’t due to my *ahem* poorness. Overall I recommend this story although the beginning might put off some people, please bare with it.
The author is not an ordinary one....he has above average writing skills and writings. Also what I liked the most was his concept and Idea which has huge potential. The plot is niche and some moments made me feel my emotions in which I didn't feel for a moment in reading novels. Also, my only advice is to show more than tell. Other than that, well you are good to go! hehe
Hmm. This story has an interesting read. Someone who becomes a sword, I can't wait to see how he will live his life. The mc too has an interesting character and can be fleshen up more. The introduction of the world background is also written well. The narratives too is easy portrayed to the readers.Writing quality, there are grammatical errors though it didn't much hinder you to enjoy reading this but you could still improve it. Overall, this book has a great and interesting start. I love to see this one grow more chapters and a must keep in my collections. And if you are a fan of transmigration and cultivation stories, then this one is definitely recommended.Keep it up author!
The novel 'You're talent is good, now it's mine' was forgotten and 'My special ability is perfect replication' was chosen. They are same traits too. Haaaaaays, what a waste.
So far the mc has barely shown a depiction of pride he has been trying lay low until caught and while I like that he isn't one to make stupid decisions off one person saying something him letting people that clearly hate him benefit from him is stupid. The villian tag is blatantly wrong which personally isn't bad if you go in not expecting one. The story development isn't bad but I wish I knew more of what was going on at this point all I know is that he plans to abandon his family so he's not tied into that stuff why no clue from what I've read it seems he would benefit more from staying with them and it's hard to understand his pov if nothing is explained. Also it seems a big part of the story is them dying and starting over but so far I'm not sure if that's gonna happen.....
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