Pokemon : Reincarnated into pokemon world as a Fanfic

I love the concept of this book and it has a lot of potentials. I noticed the first chapter has quite a number of punctuation errors and the dialogues were barely spaced. The author should work on this as it'll help the readers flow better with the book. It gets much better as you read on. Keep up the good work!❤🌹

This author has a talent for ruining his own story, and changing it completly out of no where and adding a crap ton of plot holes and contradictions that arnt hidden at all, he is also good at writing terrible 'heart warming and sad' moments, I ran seriously some of the stuff he pits in this is so retarded, Iran going to the queens birth day and killing people wtf?? lin being married off ?? wdym it was stated he decided to go back to Britain with her if not she would of stayed in huxia, how did it become she went back to get married off the author clearly has no idea what he is writing or just started a new book entirely and then accidently joined the two without reliz8ng it and posted like seriously it is just so dumb and frustrating to read, probably one of the most forced books I have ever read.

The rhythm of the novel is slow but that’s a slice of life novel, so it’s supposed to be that way.The author utilize the characters very well.And it’s noticeable as the chapters go on that the novel becomes better and better.

This needs go be chosen. This is basicaly a serious anD better version of ‘im not the Son of providence’. It doesn’t have any Young masters or anything dumb Like that and the mc knows how to use his powers effectively. Oh the biggest thing is that theres No system or reincarnation so the mc is genuinely smart.

The author gives us a stupid idiot soldier and believes that readers will be idiots with IQ5 and will believe him that a SPECIALIST who can operate special equipment is an idiot. There is a character in the story dumb-as,nob,IQ5,naive,childish,aggressive,maniac .The author is an IQ5 idiot to believe that normal readers will believe the nonsense he describes. Rating minus 100 .

Horrendously bad grammar. The writers English definitely is not fluent, but it seems like they don't do basic editing. The concepts of the story are pretty decent though.

looking forward towards updates.the pictures for reference are great 👍

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