PERSUASION

Do you know how much longer till the genius delta comes out? I’ve been dying to read silvercloud and Persephones story since reading all the others ...

The MC, Lu Wu is an a*hole. Not only does he use ppl, but he constantly belittles Dudu. Dudu is the original Lu Wu’s childhood “friend” and punching bag and when the Mc reincarnates into his body he continues the trend. Also, the way he treats his little skeleton like a tool instead of a companion is irritating. He can’t seem to understand how Dudu’s pig got a bonding skill—its bc she doesn’t treat it like a means to an end.Honestly, while I feel bad for Dudu, she has to be the biggest floor mat I’ve ever had the misfortune to read. It was said multiple times that if Lu Wu wanted to sell her she would help him count the money. Based on her character, it is absolutely true. I do have to hand it to the author tho, they made a character come alive in such a way she has only spoken one line. She seriously doesn’t speak, she just nods and goes with the program. Lu Wu will do something that causes her grief but she won’t say anything. Irl, internalizing those feelings coupled with his bullying her would breed resentment. I seriously wanted to like this novel. It’s so hard to find a good summoning novel with decent romance. Unfortunately, this novel falls short. I’m not even going to go into his underwhelming “golden finger system.” It’s so underwhelming that the novel would be better without it. While I wouldn’t recommend this book to anyone, I do applaud the author for their efforts. Writing isn’t easy, nor is it easy to put yourself out there. Perhaps I will like their next novel. Until then, good luck on your writing endeavors. ✌🏾

It's a shame that they ruined this novel with the new policy of spirit stones only for new chapters. Cost to unlock each chapter is nearly double what I earn a day and they release multiple a day so bump this. I might check up on this novel every week or two but more than likely I'll just drop it.I say it's a shame because this novel was fairly good. I really appreciate that the author doesnt try to write around intimate relationship moments like they're a prepubescent recluse who's never even heard of ***. That being said, pretty standard novel among those themed around VRMMORPGs. Slightly better written than most but MC becomes super OP as per usual.

Writing reminds me of “I Really Am a Superstar” but focused more on the comedy of the antics of a highschooler who has it hard and is weak-willed. The bugged system toots its horn and both his family and everyone else reacts to the madness. The story and world-building progresses slowly but maybe with enough chapters and length, they will be filled. I really like the freshness of the writing style and how the modern world builds on both shameless fourth-wall breaking and common thinking.

(Status)

So I hide one of the back of a thick column. Only seeing the person's shadow, when its coming closer, I can see the person. Its wearing very dark robe as the night sky. Walking in a meek manner. When the person take out its black robe. A woman, all I can see is her literally glowing hair of gold.

"Good morning, Ms Chas. You will be sitting here and no worries today, I've got coffee covered"  she replied.

Tang San puzzled asked, "Why?"