That's a really great story, I'm reading it daily since a bit more than a year I think. In my opinion the story can be divided in several arc; some of them containing smaller, mini-arc; I don't recall any bad arc, all of them were pretty good with some of them really awesome. It also gave me the impression that the quality of both the writing of the story and the translation got better and better even though it was already good at the beginning. So I really recommend you this story if you are searching for a good action story with a smart MC, no harem (until now at least, don't how it will be in the future be it doesn't fit with the MC personality) and a nice op eye ^^
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It's a good novel for power scalers, not bad overall. I loved that the mc erased the usual boring novel tropes such as "face slapping, plot armor" etc.. I truly love what you did with the novel. Aside the really excruciatingly painful slow chap tee updates, It has been an interesting experience. I realize it is still ongoing, How many more chapters are we to expect?Could you expand or shed more light on the basis of the universe or multiverse and/or its dimensions. For example, is the universe three, four, five or infinite dimensional(hilbert space)? Is it a type 2, 3 or 4 multiverse etc.I love the subtle integration of mathematical concepts such as higher infinities(Which shows the author isn't imagination-impaired) and Patrick transcending it and ascribing the concept of absolute infinity to Patrick.. But I felt you could've taken it further, it felt vague, open to numerous interpretations and cannot be likened to the actual georg cantor's "absolute infinity" without further exposition and basis. If your goal is to create a really op character, you should work on these.. And more importantly, expand on the basis of the universe and multiverse. You can always expand your research on set theories, although, you seem to get the gist of it.You went on about "omnivastance" but you never truly explained what it meant in the grand scheme of things.. Is it likened to the Hindu concept of "omnivastance"? I loved raliegh and want to see more of the character, bring more exposure to the side characters, So, as not to make the story stale.In the beginning you mentioned luo zheng (from apotheosis) and nie li. hinting a future encounter between these characters and Patrick. Do you still have plans for this?I'd also suggest you give Patrick a true challenge...His battles are predictable. I've been following this novel for a year now and I hope you won't let us (Your loyal readers) down.
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This definitely is one of the best reviews and recommendations “spotlights” I’ve seen and the weak hero spotlight pushed me to read the WEBTOON and it didn’t disappoint
SInce I've already read quite a decent amount of chapters, my opinions finally compelled in one. The book is good, no doubts — system is realized pretty well! Interesting to read, as well as the writing quality is fluent and easy-to-understand. I took the time to read some good systemic novels, so for people who love those genres, this is a gem.
To all my readers who continued to message me and left powerstones on my story here in WN (despite me going MIA for months), I thank you so so much! Especially to those who donated, I love you! You lot are the reason why I dare not abandon this story.
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