Paramount Magus

Pretty much trash. Imagine helping your enemy heal. Just blackmail them. But no. Author made the Mc a naive brat. He acts calm but he is stupid. "The capital has rules no indiscriminate killing" but yeah the he family poisoned a person. Feels so contradicting. Dropped it.

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I like it.It has That nice DC vibe to it i hope you dont Drop it.You could probably fIx the grammar up and make some spaces with the paragraphs.Overall its good

Nevanna seemed to have been struck with inspiration as her eyes brightened.

" kayaknya ndak bisa tuuh..."

needles could be seen underfoot because no snow had been able to