Pambihirang Harana- A JhoCey AU!

Writing needs improvement especially in the grammar area but other than that this story is amazing on its own. The idea is very interesting and each chapter keeps you going. I hardly notice the mistakes because I enjoyed reading this. Hope you don't drop!

As long as it's no Harem.... I'm starting to doubt these type of Titles in CNs now. Dunno we will see I guess!!

Wow look at me, I am 10000 years old and have the maturity of an infant. Celebrate me for I have lived for so long without gaining anything.Pro Tipp for prospective writers:Don't create an MC you can't understand or even imagine. Stay with what you know and build up from there.Even 90 short years are enough for humans to understand that arrogance and pettiness doesn't contribute to conflict resolution.

The title is a little misleading....i read with the expectation of something along the lines of a litrpg and discovered an apocalyptic cultivation novel .... not to say that this book isnt good it actually is surprisingly well written..overall definitely worth giving a shot

My uncle is a cultivation big shot:But he took a sleeping beauty to his room and now has a peerless std STDSTDSTDSTDSTDSTDSTDSTD

This story is terrible. The MC is ridiculously stupid despite being a beggar and gets even dumber after learning magic. BS’s his way through everything with no real goal in sight with just as bad companions. There is no consistency or thought put into the novel like he gets hit by a book that is 1 metre wide and half a metre thick, that book would kill him because it’s so heavy. Place names got mixed up like it was the Myer continent and them the Metalhin or what ever his family name is continent. Just don’t read, licking the pavement would be more enjoyable than reading this.

Wow, this is an amazing piece of art. The grammar and flow of the story as whole flows. But mostly I admire the author's ability to keep my attention stuck on every word he writes. Even if it hurts to say this, this is a level of writing my novels might not be able to reach........yet. Regardless good job, and I hope you update more.

Just read the first chapters of this novel and I am already hooked on the Story. The Pasing is good,  the character development is a little bit fast for my taste, the worldbuilding and interactions between characters are just great. Overall this novel is a 10/10Btw English is not my native language