I love the plot and the story, even thoughI don't like the complete death of danny, the masked saber (expecting that he will somehow make come back). But I do have a doubt why the MC is designed in a way that he wants to tell everyone his secrets even after he was abandoned, and his brother was backstabbed. It's like he's ignoring the basic human trait of mistrust and suspicion.
A story worth reading and seeing the ride. Itd be nice to have this translated.Hey at least this story stays consistent, a lot of novels with higher writing quality but disorganized and messy stories
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This is the first novel I have decided to review, and I wish that I could rate it 5 stars. It is a great read and I have enjoyed it. Unfortunately, chapter 108 is the last chapter that is placed in order. What is supposed to be chapter 109 is only on Patreon. You won't find that out until after you have paid the money to reach chapter 109, when there is a very noticable chapter skip. If this issue gets resolved, I hope I am allowed to change this review to 5 stars. If not for this single major issue, the story would deserve 5 stars. Any other issues I have had are insignificant compared to the quality of this book. I hope this issue gets resolved so I can continue reading this story. More information can be found in my comment on chapter 108 for those who have already paid to get that far.
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Hey guys, This is BMDR here, the author of this book. So far, I have managed to reach 100 chapters for this novel and also, written 153,930 words in total. At this point, some of you who carefully read my novel will realize that this was just the prelude of the story in general, thus there weren't anything exciting. However, from chapter 100 on wards, we will be having a new arc or sorts and thus, I will like to know how you all feel about my first novel. I will like to know that through your honest reviews and possibly your support of this novel in general by giving out power stones when you can and or other stuffs.Other than that, you can check out my other novel: Blood Assimilation, currently 36 chapters with 62,170 words in total and will try to update it daily along with this one. That is all I have to say.Thank you for your time, and have a wonderful reading experience.
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