Unique,good MC ,good world building. Great prospects........................................................................................................................
This **** is trash Mc wanna hide his personality when The previous Mc already forgot his memory everyone knows this whats the point in hiding it an then you got him hiding that he could do magic for no reason at all an then another turn off is wanting to make a portal to bring men to that world so dumb such a beta MC thats retarded so dumb most the time its just complaints about dumb stuff how to satisfy the world of woman like who cares you just woke up an now wanna take the frustrations of all woman pullin a naruto GARBAGE
The MC is Anti-Hero: petty, racist, ***ist, selfish, arrogant, and uncaring about anyone who is not of immediate benefit to himself. In short, the negative stereotypical Chinese MC. The world is rule by might, dog-eat-dog, POS that wouldn't have survived the second wave of monsters because everyone is undercutting each other in search of personal benefits. Oh, and there's virtually no world building dialogue/narration that I've encountered.If you can tolerate that, it's mildly entertaining.
Having a blast with this one. Opens with great hook as the protagonist fights for his life out at sea against creatures and is apparently drowning, before jumping back in time to bring the reader up to speed. The writing style is certainly unique and the author is a great story-teller. Moves at a great pace which keeps the reader glued to the screen. Certainly seems like an epic novel thus far. Good effort.
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It's not very common here, on WN, to find a story written from the first person's point of view. It should be added that the author sticks to this formula quite well. His main character has his traumas, but who doesn't?The author meticulously builds the world he created from the beginning. The plot is intriguing. Well done!Happy new year!
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